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2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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It is difficult to define what successful life is. But it is what myself is feel. Until now, I think that I living successful life. First, I have a job which is sufficent my life style and feel responsible for my student. Second, I have dreamed meeting wise husband. I got married and met such a wise man. Third, I am not satisfy now my life condition. And I always try to study and try to act for my succesful life. English study, Math study, Swimming and so on.

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much for doing your homework, [이름] :)

Success is highly subjective, so I heard that we might not think we\'re successful, but other people think we certainly are.

Have a great day^^

It is difficult to define what successful life is. But it is what myself is feel.
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It is difficult to define what successful life is, but it is what I feel.
Until now, I think that I living successful life.
>>
Until now, I think that I am living a successful life.
First, I have a job which is sufficent my life style and feel responsible for my student.
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First, I have a job which is sufficient for my lifestyle and I feel responsible for my students.
 Second, I have dreamed meeting wise husband.

>>Second, I dreamed about meeting a wise husband.
 I got married and met such a wise man.
>>CORRECT!
Third, I am not satisfy now my life condition. And I always try to study and try to act for my succesful life.

>>Third, I am not satisfied with my life condition now, and I always try to study and try to act for my successful life.

 English study, Math study, Swimming and so on.

>>For example, I study English, Math, learn how to swim and so on.


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