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2018-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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If I travel other nation of long distance from Korea, I will do homestay. Because I don't konw the area information, they will be affect to me. Thanks to them I can enjoy traveling more comfortable than what I difficultly search the area on website and so on .. Even if I haven't done that , if I get chace I would like to homestay.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I think it would be a good experience to try homestay. It is cost efficient and it allows you to meet new people and create new relationships.

- T. Beth

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If I travel other nation of long distance from Korea, I will do homestay.
>>> If I travel to other nations that are far from Korea, I will do a homestay.  

Because I don\'t konw the area information, they will be affect to me.
>>> Because I don\'t know much about the area, it would be bothersome.

>>> OR: Not having a lot of information about the area would affect me.  
Thanks to them I can enjoy traveling more comfortable than what I difficultly search the area on website and so on ..
>>> Thanks to them, I can enjoy traveling more comfortably than having difficulties searching the area online.  
Even if I haven\'t done that , if I get chace I would like to homestay.

>>> CORRECT.   

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