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2018-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Before I got married, I used middle class of accommodations. Most of accommodations's level are middle . Except hotel. This spring, my husband and I and his friend's family went special a accommodation in Kwnag won do of Korea. That place there is with condo and ski resort. The accommodation we stay was high grade . Window view and service and wide indoors and so on. There people's rest was very calm and relax. The accommodation made up of a membership system. So every facilities are very clean and assidants are very kind. Cost was very expensive, as expected.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you so much for this. Staying in a luxurious hotel is like paradise. You pay a lot for a good experience.

- T. Beth

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Before I got married, I used middle class of accommodations.
>>> OR: Before I got married, I used standard type of accommodations.   
Most of accommodations\'s level are middle . Except hotel.
>>> Most of accommodations are of standard level, except for hotels.   

This spring, my husband and I and his friend\'s family went special a accommodation in Kwnag won do of Korea.
>>> This spring, my husband and I, together with my his friend\'s families, went to a special accommodation in Kangwondo, Korea.    
That place there is with condo and ski resort.

>>> The place has a condo and a ski resort.   

The accommodation we stay was high grade. Window view and service and wide indoors and so on.
>>> The accommodation we stayed in was a luxurious one with a good window view, good quality service, wide space and so on.   
There people\'s rest was very calm and relax.
>>> People can have a clam and relaxing rest there.   
The accommodation made up of a membership system.
>>> The accommodation comes with a membership system.   
So every facilities are very clean and assidants are very kind.
>>> So, all facilities are very clean and assistants are very kind.   

>>> OR: So, every facility is quite clean and the staff members are very kind.
 Cost was very expensive, as expected.

>>> OR: It costs an arm and a leg, as expected.    

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