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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. That\'s good to hear then. It seems like you made the right choice to live in that area.
- T. Beth
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Sure. I\'m satisfied very much this place I living in now.
>>> OR: Sure. I\'m quite satisfied with this place I am living in now.
>>> OR: Sure. I\'m very much satisfied with the place I am living in now.
The place what I living is near to Seoul.
>>> The place where I am living is near Seoul.
It takes about 30 minites by car.
>>> It takes about 30 minutes by car.
This place\'s air is very fresh,because it is surroundings mountains and forest.
>>> The air in this place is fresh because it is surrounded by mountains and forests.
Furthermore, each apartment\'s interval are wide.
>>> Furthermore, each apartment\'s distance is not too close from each other.
So privacy space is protected.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: So privacy is protected. / So personal space is protected.
Above all things, the apartment\'s price is reasonable.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: On top of that, the apartment\'s price is reasonable.
In Seoul, we can\'t buy aprtment by this village\'s apartment price.
>>> In Seoul, we cannot buy an apartment with this village apartment\'s price.
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