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2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Sure. I'm satisfied very much this place I living in now. The place what I living is near to Seoul. It takes about 30 minites by car. This place's air is very fresh,because it is surroundings mountains and forest. Furthermore, each apartment's interval are wide. So privacy space is protected. Above all things, the apartment's price is reasonable. In Seoul, we can't buy aprtment by this village's apartment price.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. That\'s good to hear then. It seems like you made the right choice to live in that area.

- T. Beth

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Sure. I\'m satisfied very much this place I living in now.
>>> OR:  Sure. I\'m quite satisfied with this place I am living in now. 

>>> OR: Sure. I\'m very much satisfied with the place I am living in now.

The place what I living is near to Seoul.

>>>  The place where I am living is near Seoul.  

It takes about 30 minites by car.
>>> It takes about 30 minutes by car.    
This place\'s air is very fresh,because it is surroundings mountains and forest.
>>> The air in this place is fresh because it is surrounded by mountains and forests.    
Furthermore, each apartment\'s interval are wide.
>>>  Furthermore, each apartment\'s distance is not too close from each other.   
So privacy space is protected.
>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: So privacy is protected. / So personal space is protected.    
Above all things, the apartment\'s price is reasonable.
>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: On top of that, the apartment\'s  price is reasonable.   
In Seoul, we can\'t buy aprtment by this village\'s apartment price.

>>> In Seoul, we cannot buy an apartment with this village apartment\'s price.   

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