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Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. Those factors or things you mentioned are indeed important. You should feel comfortable and convenient in a place you live in.

- T. Beth

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What I think importantly is surrounding environment.
>>> What I think importantly is the surrounding environment.

>>> OR: What I consider mostly is the surrounding environment.  

For example, if surroundings of apartment are surrounded by entertainment center of area , I think hate that.
>>> For example, if the area of the apartment is surrounded by entertainment centers or facilities, I think I would hate that.     
Surroundings environment have to clean and be calm.
>>> Surrounding environment has to be clean and calm.    
Second, traffic have to be convenient.
>>> Second, traffic has to be convenient.    
Of course, I have a car but sometimes when I go to anywhere without a my car,public transport is important.
>>>  Of course I have a car, but sometimes when I go anywhere without my car, public transportation is important. 

>>> OR: I do have my own car but sometimes when I go somewhere without my car, public transportation is important.    
Third, floor of apartment is important.
>>> Third,  the floor of the apartment is important.  

>>> OR: Third, the floor where the apartment is located is important.
 The lowest floor is very noisy and dangerous.
>>> CORRECT.    
So, I prefer higher floor than lower floor.

>>>  CORRECT.