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Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. I heard, investing in real estate is the trend today because prices of houses and buildings are increasing over time. I would invest in real estate as well if I had the money.
- T. Beth
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I prefer safety about property.
>>> CORRECT.
Of course, long years ago, I bought a apartment and rent to someone.
>>> Of course, long time ago, I bought an apartment and had it rented out by someone else.
I received monthly rent from them and I repaid loan.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> I received monthly rent from them and I used that to repay my loan.
After years, I sold a apartment.
>>> After some time, I sold the apartment.
At that time, I repaid all loan and save the money ,as well.
>>> At that time, I repaid all the loan and was able to save money as well.
Likewise, investing it somewhere is more efficient than save money in the bank.
>>> Investing it somewhere is more efficient than just saving the money in the bank.
Because in the bank\'s interest is very low.
>>> Because the interest in the bank is very low.
Even though I don\'t have a lot money, if I have a lot money, I\'ll invest real estate.
>>> Even though I don\'t have a lot money, but if I do, I\'ll invest in real estate.
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