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Hi Anny^^
Thank you for your effort and for letting me help you with your composition.
people long ago used that but people nowadays use a person car
>> Long ago, people use this kind of transportation but nowadays they prefer to use their own car.
many people are going to school or work by this
>> Many people are going to school by this kind of transportation.
the fare is 1,200원
>> The fare is 1.200원
if you pay the traffic card you can transfer to other line one more time
>> If you paid for the traffic card you are eligible to transfer to another line.
sometimes we are taking a this then There are so much more different than before
>> Sometimes, we are taking this. It is so much different now than before.
what is this?
>> correct
bus
>>correct
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