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2018-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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quiz people long ago used that but people nowadays use a person car many people are going to school or work by this the fare is 1,200원 if you pay the traffic card you can transfer to other line one more time somegimes we are taking a this then There are so much more different than before what is this? bus

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Hi Anny^^


Thank you for your effort and for letting me help you with your composition.


people long ago used that but people nowadays use a person car

>> Long ago, people use this kind of transportation but nowadays they prefer to use their own car.
 many people are going to school or work by this

>> Many people are going to school by this kind of transportation.
 the fare is 1,200원

>> The fare is 1.200원
if you pay the traffic card you can transfer to other line one more time

>> If you paid for the traffic card you are eligible to transfer to another line.
 sometimes we are taking a this then There are so much more different than before

>> Sometimes, we are taking this. It is so much different now than before.
 what is this?

>> correct



 bus

>>correct

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