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Actually, there has been a variety of discussion to many parts of the society with much interested in this issue about the vital important role in their child\'s development about different situation.

>>> There has been a variety of discussions from the society about a child\'s development in different situation.

I would like to give this solution in detail.

>>> CORRECT!

   In the first place, there are many people argue that there is strongly association between parents and their children in our house.

>>> In the first place, there are many people who argue about the strong relationship between the parents and their children in their house.

Imagine about this situation, all the baby met the their parents at first when they open the eyes, their parents always have gave loved mind all the time their children always receive their mind.

>>> Imagine this situation, all babies met their parents at the moment they opened their eyes. Their parents always loved them and they were always in their mind.

 Even if their children have a disease and many problems, their parents always are supporting and encouraging their children.

>>> Even if their children have a disease or problem, they are always supporting and encouraging them.

 so I think this tie is very different relationship than others.

>>> I think this tie is really different from other relationships.

this relationship is permanent in our lives to be development.

>>> This relationship is permanent in our lives.

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