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In the other hand, there are a lot of people believe that there is close connection between parents and many factor involving computer, Tv and friend who they like.

>>> On the other hand, there are a lot of people who believe that there is a close connection between their parents and other things like gadgets, appliances or even friends.

 as far as I know, that there are many doble income family in our socity, even if they want to spend much time with their child, they can not about it.

>>> As far as I know, there are many double income families in our society, even if they wanted to spend more time with their children they cannot do it.

Unfortunately, there are most children who spend a lot of time in front of TV or computer to have good time.

>>> Unfortunately, there are a lot of children who spend a lot of time in front of TV or computer to have good time.

 and what is more, they always meet their friend to play something to enjoy.

>>> They also meet their friends to do something enjoyable for them.

 It is most important to have friend among them because they can learn this kind of feather such as friendship, relationship, communication through their relation.

>>> It is very important to have friends to learn the art of friendship, relationship and communication.

  in my opinion, I use to have heart disease when I was child so I sometimes fall down on the floor but my parent are always nursing and supporting me.

>>> In my own experience, my parents supported and took care of me when I was still a child and had some attacks due to my heart disease.

 I can become adult that I don\'t have disease.

>>> I became an adult and I was able to overcome my disease.

  As a result, I have finally figure out about other people and I think of it.

>>> As a result, I have figured out the situation of other people and thought about it.

 In fact I am not expert about this issue.

>>> In fact, I am not an expert about this issue.

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